Happy Fourth of July!

HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY!!

My wish is for you and your family to enjoy

this wonderful summer holiday and to have a safe

Fourth of July celebration experience.

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Committing the Perfect Crime!

I’m in the process of writing the second book in my Detective Rosie Young Murder Mystery Series. This one is called The Serial Chemist. The first in the series, Almost Dead, was a great success with a 4.8 out of a 5.0-star rating on Amazon. Click here to read a synopsis or to check out the reviews.

In developing the plot for this new book, I wanted to create an especially difficult case for Detective Young and her partner, Vince Mendez. To do that, I researched websites for tips on how to commit the perfect murder. Fortunately for me as a murder mystery writer, there is much information on the subject, but I found some interesting, yet disturbing, data regarding the clearance rate of modern murders.

A disturbing statistic is that about a third of the murders committed in the United States remain unsolved. Fifty years ago, the clearance rate was over 90% compared to the present-day rate of only 64.1%. Note that the term “clearance rate” does not equal the conviction rate. “Clearing the case” refers to the fact that the investigation resulted in an arrest that went to trial. Since the 1960’s, over 200,000 murders remain unsolved with no arrests.

So, back to my research on committing the perfect murder! What should a writer consider if he or she intends to plot the perfect (unsolvable) murder? The top five considerations to commit the perfect murder are as follows:

  • Don’t leave any DNA behind. Tracing DNA to the suspect is the surest way to prove that someone committed a crime, particularly if the DNA is linked to the murder weapon or other very specific incriminating object. The most untraceable crimes are committed in public places—like parks or shopping malls—where lots of different DNA are present.
  • Pick a random victim. The easiest murders to solve are those committed by someone close to the victim. A relative, friend, or significant other are always among the first to be considered by the authorities.
  • Commit a murder in a different locality than where the murderer lives. The villain should not travel so far as to leave evidence of a trip (such as an airline or hotel reservation) that links to the crime scene, but committing a crime in one’s own locality also often produces connections that make a case easier to solve.
  • Don’t allow the villain to be conspicuous. While the general rule is to time a murder in the very early hours of the day when most witnesses are asleep, your murderer should not look out of place on a street or other setting near the crime scene at any time or even be recognized acquiring the murder weapon; and, the murderer should not use a murder weapon that can link the crime back to him or her in any way. Use an unusual weapon that the murderer is not familiar with (common brands only) and the villain should purchase that weapon away from a familiar local.
  • Plan an appropriate alibi and getaway. Be sure that the murderer can be connected to an event or to other people at the approximate time of the crime (time of death can usually only be approximate) and make sure your villain uses a method to escape the crime scene that does not provide a definitive description. An easily identifiable vehicle that has a distinct sound, such as a throaty sports car engine, would be something that sticks in the mind of a witness. I’ve read that a bicycle makes an excellent getaway vehicle. It’s not easily identifiable as different from other bikes and it’s relatively silent.

Finally, if your villain commits the perfect crime, you can still enhance the plot by writing in an arrest of your murderer. Remember, when a case goes to trial, the suspect needs to be found guilty beyond a reasonable doubt.

Witnesses are discredited all the time on the witness stand by defense attorneys, and prosecutors often try cases only when the police can deliver “open and shut” cases that will lead to convictions or a plea bargain.

Thoughts? Comments? I’d love to hear them!

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Changing Ordinary People into Heroes!

In last week’s blog, I discussed fiction novel character development techniques. I ended the blog by stating, “Make your characters real and believable by first making them real to you.”

An evolving fiction plot is not very interesting unless there is conflict and some sort of change in your protagonist by the end of the story. It could be the resolution of a world-changing event in a thriller, finding the killer in a murder mystery, or some major change in your main character’s world or their specific world view that makes the story interesting.

The problem arises when an author attempts to make a character believable by making an ordinary character do extraordinary (heroic) things. How does the writer make such fiction believable?

The main character in my most recent novel is simply a guy with a troubled past trying to do the right thing. The problem is the bad guys keep getting in the way of my protagonist’s normal life. My protagonist has two choices: ignore a world-changing event and hide his head in the sand, or step up to right the wrongs.

My task as a writer is to take this character who craves a normal existence and place him in situations that challenge his entire idea of what a normal life should be and force him to make choices he’d rather not make. My protagonist is a successful pharmacist who owns a very specialized pharmacy practice; and, in the last two novels, he’s turned his back on his everyday world to fight villains and avert sinister events that could have global consequences.

How does a writer make that monumental leap, and successfully take the reader along, in a journey to evolve this everyday guy into a hero, and still make it believable?

The answer lies in how the first act of the novel is handled—how one builds a character’s world in the first 25% of the novel by drizzling in enough history about a protagonist’s life so that an advanced or second level of background on this character is achieved. This is how a normal character’s heroics come off as believable.

In last week’s blog, I stated that I develop characters by using a 3P Model: building on the physical aspects of a character, and including some important psychological aspects and specific philosophies of the character.

Regarding advanced character development, the writer must focus on specific traits and skills that the character might possess, but that aren’t often visible, to meet the challenges that the writer presents for that character.

These traits and skills might include:

  • Specific past traumas (both physical and psychological) that create specialized motivations to act out of the ordinary in certain situations. For instance, an adult abused as a child will react differently to seeing a child being yanked roughly by the arm than a person who grew up in a loving, caring family.
  • If your character has hidden skills developed in a previous job or an earlier environment, those skills are never forgotten or lost and can re-emerge as necessary when the character is confronted with a life-threatening event.
  • Hidden secrets can fester over time and force a character to react differently to tragic events. Creating an abnormal past for your protagonist allows secrets that should remain hidden to evolve into heroic actions when a character is confronted with saving his or her own life, or the life of a loved one.
  • Specific, deep-seated feelings can often explain why an outwardly normal person might act in an extraordinary way regarding a tragic event.

I delight in writing fiction and in creating situations for my protagonist that goes beyond the limits of his everyday world and forces him to act in extraordinary ways. To do that in a believable fashion, I must first load the character’s background with secret histories, hidden skills and past experiences that the everyday person has never been exposed to.

Thoughts? Comments? I’d love to hear them!

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Fictional Character Development 101

As many of you know, I’ve recently published my third novel. Click HERE to Review or Buy! While deep in the process of promoting that book, I can’t help but look to the future and begin another one.

In last week’s blog, I spoke about what to do after publishing a book and how to fill that void. My best answer was to start another book—and I have. As I pulled out my storyboard (yes, an old school dry erase board – Lol), the first thing I did was construct the main characters for this next novel. To do that, I reread a couple of my old blogs that addressed character development.

One of those blogs particularly gave me focus and direction to create what I think will be a totally different, unique character never seen before in my writing. I found this blog so useful that I decided to share it with you today.

The following is a repost of that blog from more than two years ago. I hope it provides some insight into creating a character or two for one of your future stories.

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While it’s true that I often base a character on real people, transforming a mental image of someone into a fictional character is an intricate process. It’s comparable to applying multiple layers of varnish onto raw wood. You apply, buff, reapply, rebuff and continue the process until the wood develops depth and beauty.

Character development, in similar ways, layers all the components of a person in order to build a multi-dimensional being that the reader can connect with in the two-dimensional world of literature.

In the process of developing a character, I follow something called a 3P Model. I structure a character physiologically, psychologically and philosophically.

The Physical Aspects of a Character: You should have a good idea what your character looks like before conveying that to a reader. Physical appearance should first be locked down in your own mind. Even if you never specifically describe that character’s anatomical features in your writing, you should visualize a definite image.

Appearances often influence how others act. Hints of physical attributes give the reader much needed information to arrive at an accurate mental image. These images allow your readers to feel comfortable about how your characters act and how they interact with others in your story.

But a seasoned writer rarely goes into detail describing a character. Instead of saying, “She’s five foot eleven, has red hair and weighs 110-lbs,” you might say, “Her legs went on forever, her waistline the envy of most women, her flaming hair a perfect complement to her peaches and cream complexion,” or some other subtle, more pictorial description. Be creative, not biological, when describing characters.

The Psychology of the Character: Characters’ mental states—their feelings and their perceptions of the world around them—drive their actions. This is where background development becomes so important. Create a virtual life for your main characters, a pedigree that makes them who they are and which determines their actions. For example, a person raised in a loving family with close siblings would react differently in a given situation than a person who grew up in foster care or reform school.

It’s said that we are the product of our life experiences. For readers to be able to connect with the characters we create, we must construct full lives for our characters. That means we should know where and how they were raised, educated and what sacrifices they endured to reach their present state in life. Most of what you envision (preferably in a brief outline) will never actually be stated in your book unless it’s important for the story’s progress, but it provides valuable information to direct your character and further the story.

Knowing how a character would feel in a scene provides important visual clues that you can use to indicate what a character is thinking and feeling without wasting dialogue. For instance, a character fidgeting indicates nervousness and putting a hand over the mouth could express disbelief.

The reader should be satisfied that a character acts appropriately in any given scene. Your job as a writer is not only to write the scene but also to direct your characters to act accordingly. A reader should never say, “Hmm, he would never have done that!” It takes the reader out of the story and you lose the reader’s emotional connection to the character.

The Character’s Philosophy: Each of us has opinions and beliefs about most any given subject. Our characters should also be definitive, and those distinct beliefs and philosophies are what drive the story one way or another. An indifferent character doesn’t make for good storytelling.

A character can be indecisive initially and that can create important dramatic tension, but at some point their inner principles must take over. Without a character with strong viewpoints, there’s no reason for the character to take action—and that translates to NO STORY! Action moves a story forward and motivates our protagonists and antagonists to do what they should do to entertain the reader.

Characters can be good or bad, but rarely should they be neutral. Definitive characters create and drive your story. A villain’s selfishness and greed make good fiction as well as the altruistic concerns of a hero, but neutral characters lose the reader’s interest.

Finally, success is in the details. A well-conceived character has likes, dislikes, and specific needs—just as real people do. Everyone has merits, flaws and quirks. Your dialogue and narrative should be peppered with those of your main characters. The more these individual traits are exposed, the more emotional connection the reader has with a character. Make your characters real and believable by first making them real to you.

Thoughts? Comments? I’d love to hear them!

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So, You’ve Published a Novel! Now What?

This is the question that many authors ask themselves each time one of their masterpieces goes to market. The writing, the editing, the cover art, the re-editing, the intensity to detail and all the other tasks of getting a manuscript to the point of taking that last irreversible step to say, “PUBLISH IT” can be daunting.

The end of all that frenzy, however, can be just as overwhelming with the emotional void that’s left behind and the lingering question, “What now?” Maybe it’s a sort of “writer’s empty nest syndrome” thing!

Certainly, there are continued marketing tasks, book signings, book readings and social media splashes, and the like to deal with. However, the question of what to do next, of what to create next, still lingers. An author is a creative soul first and foremost, someone who lives to craft something out of thin air. Uncertainty about future publishing can fester like a splinter left unattended under one’s skin.

There is a wonderful focus that takes over a writer’s psyche when writing, editing and polishing a manuscript. Although writing a new book creates its own challenges, a writer usually relishes that time away from the everyday world of chaos to create a work of “word art”—whether that art be fiction, non-fiction, essay, poetry, or the like.

From the many authors I have interacted with, the act of creating is what they identify with and gravitate to as artists. The marketing efforts are certainly a means to an end, whether that be for fame or fortune, but the general term of “marketing a book” involves tasks that are often uncomfortable, and even foreign, to a writer.

Since publishing my third novel Imperfect Murder last week (Click here to Review or Buy), I anticipated such a psychological void in my professional life. After all, this is my third novel and I did experience a sort of letdown after publishing each of my first two books.

This time, however, I anticipated the emotional roller coaster of the “high” of publishing and the “low” feeling of questioning what comes next. There was no “low” or void for me this time! I’m already in the process of creating a few short stories, some of which I may share in future blogs. AND, I’ve gotten out my storyboard to flesh out the plot for my next novel. It will be the second book of my detective murder mystery series that I published last year.  

This fourth novel that I’m starting, presently titled The Serial Chemist, is about a serial killer with deep psychological issues and a storyline that involves a very big surprise at the end.

So, I’ve gotten “back on the horse”, so to speak, and delved right into the creative process of fiction writing.

Thoughts? Comments? I’d love to hear them!

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IMPERFECT MURDER Paperback Available Today!

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Jon Masters learns that trusted friend and mentor, Dan Whitmore, has died. Although the police have ruled the death a suicide, Dan’s wife, Sheila, believes her husband was murdered and pleads with Jon to help her prove it.

Despite conflicting evidence and an uncooperative police detective, the case is reopened as a murder investigation. Retracing the last hours of Dan’s life, Jon uncovers information to indicate his friend was not only murdered but possibly implicated in distributing pharmaceuticals which could put millions of lives at risk.

Was Dan a willing accomplice or an innocent victim? The answer surprises even Jon. As he races to identify Dan’s killer, a two-fold conspiracy to undermine the world’s drug delivery system as well as to destabilize international politics unfolds.

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SUMMER SERIES SPECIAL – NEW BOOK RELEASE

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(A Jon Masters Novel – Book 2)

Jon Masters learns that trusted friend and mentor, Dan Whitmore, has died. Although the police have ruled the death a suicide, Dan’s wife, Sheila, believes her husband was murdered and pleads with Jon to help her prove it.

Despite conflicting evidence and an uncooperative police detective, the case is reopened as a murder investigation. Retracing the last hours of Dan’s life, Jon uncovers information to indicate his friend was not only murdered but possibly implicated in distributing pharmaceuticals which could put millions of lives at risk.

Was Dan a willing accomplice or an innocent victim? The answer surprises even Jon. As he races to identify Dan’s killer, a two-fold conspiracy to undermine the world’s drug delivery system as well as to destabilize international politics unfolds.

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